Adverting video about Fearless!
#1
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I maded this video for fun, and on small project for practicing my editing skills Smile

Some people can find picture about their RPs, i taked all pics from diffrent Rp - stories.

Enjoy!

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#2
Video is private. Cannot watch it.
#3
My bad, I uploaded it at 3.00 am i had my mind in pillow. ^^
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#4
It's very dramatic.
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#5
It's alright, but try to improve your English a lil', it made me not take the video serious.
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#6
(03-19-2014, 06:19 AM)Midget Wrote: It's very dramatic.

(03-19-2014, 09:08 AM)Jan Wrote: It's alright, but try to improve your English a lil', it made me not take the video serious.


This.
user title was put to "one of the elders" by default, and holy shit does that sound extreme
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#7
A few tips,
  • Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
  • Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
  • Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
  • Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
  • Have some moving pictures.
  • Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...

But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
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(03-19-2014, 10:18 AM)myfloodify Wrote: A few tips,
  • Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
  • Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
  • Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
  • Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
  • Have some moving pictures.
  • Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...

But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!

Take this advice! it was alright, but i skipped all the writing, too long and boring. If you want to make a proper trailer (if thats what you were trying to do) make it in 2 minutes, and cram it all in, and make it BOOM in your face, not dramatic.
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#9
Alraight Thanks for all tips, and as i said it was just practising ^^ And there can be spelling errors because i did it like at 3:00 am. But yes thanks for everyone! Smile
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#10
(03-19-2014, 10:18 AM)myfloodify Wrote: snip

Implying fearless players are not dramatic.
user title was put to "one of the elders" by default, and holy shit does that sound extreme
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