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Adverting video about Fearless! - Nipple - 03-15-2014
I maded this video for fun, and on small project for practicing my editing skills
Some people can find picture about their RPs, i taked all pics from diffrent Rp - stories.
Enjoy!
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Venom - 03-15-2014
Video is private. Cannot watch it.
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Nipple - 03-16-2014
My bad, I uploaded it at 3.00 am i had my mind in pillow. ^^
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Haarek - 03-19-2014
It's very dramatic.
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Jan - 03-19-2014
It's alright, but try to improve your English a lil', it made me not take the video serious.
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - kakcraft - 03-19-2014
(03-19-2014, 06:19 AM)Midget Wrote: It's very dramatic.
(03-19-2014, 09:08 AM)Jan Wrote: It's alright, but try to improve your English a lil', it made me not take the video serious.
This.
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Floodify - 03-19-2014
A few tips,
- Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
- Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
- Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
- Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
- Have some moving pictures.
- Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...
But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Syntex - 03-19-2014
(03-19-2014, 10:18 AM)myfloodify Wrote: A few tips,
- Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
- Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
- Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
- Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
- Have some moving pictures.
- Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...
But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
Take this advice! it was alright, but i skipped all the writing, too long and boring. If you want to make a proper trailer (if thats what you were trying to do) make it in 2 minutes, and cram it all in, and make it BOOM in your face, not dramatic.
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - Nipple - 03-19-2014
Alraight Thanks for all tips, and as i said it was just practising ^^ And there can be spelling errors because i did it like at 3:00 am. But yes thanks for everyone!
RE: Adverting video about Fearless! - kakcraft - 03-19-2014
(03-19-2014, 10:18 AM)myfloodify Wrote: snip
Implying fearless players are not dramatic.