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03-15-2014, 07:43 PM
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I maded this video for fun, and on small project for practicing my editing skills
Some people can find picture about their RPs, i taked all pics from diffrent Rp - stories.
Enjoy!
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03-15-2014, 07:58 PM
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Video is private. Cannot watch it.
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03-16-2014, 03:27 AM
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My bad, I uploaded it at 3.00 am i had my mind in pillow. ^^
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03-19-2014, 06:19 AM
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It's very dramatic.
Systems with low or shallow player-to-player interaction erode the social dynamics that keeps FL interesting.
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03-19-2014, 09:08 AM
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It's alright, but try to improve your English a lil', it made me not take the video serious.
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03-19-2014, 09:36 AM
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(03-19-2014, 06:19 AM)Midget Wrote: It's very dramatic.
(03-19-2014, 09:08 AM)Jan Wrote: It's alright, but try to improve your English a lil', it made me not take the video serious.
This.
user title was put to "one of the elders" by default, and holy shit does that sound extreme
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03-19-2014, 10:18 AM
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A few tips,
- Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
- Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
- Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
- Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
- Have some moving pictures.
- Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...
But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
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03-19-2014, 10:34 AM
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(03-19-2014, 10:18 AM)myfloodify Wrote: A few tips,
- Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
- Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
- Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
- Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
- Have some moving pictures.
- Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...
But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
Take this advice! it was alright, but i skipped all the writing, too long and boring. If you want to make a proper trailer (if thats what you were trying to do) make it in 2 minutes, and cram it all in, and make it BOOM in your face, not dramatic.
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03-19-2014, 12:32 PM
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Alraight Thanks for all tips, and as i said it was just practising ^^ And there can be spelling errors because i did it like at 3:00 am. But yes thanks for everyone!
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03-19-2014, 01:20 PM
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(03-19-2014, 10:18 AM)myfloodify Wrote: snip
Implying fearless players are not dramatic.
user title was put to "one of the elders" by default, and holy shit does that sound extreme
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