[Unofficial] Redemption

[BasicallyMental]

I am a little confused as to what you are aiming to achieve and what your intentions are with this organization/clan. You've publicised a roster that somewhat screams Mafia, you claim that you're a family, what's the family name? Redemption Family? Not only that but your ranks stretch from your classic Mafia ranks and then suddenly turns military and then takes a leap into corporate America. So which is it? Mafia, PMC or a company? (I understand that you are running a business alongside)

Your backstory is incomplete and doesn't really explain anything about the organization/clan itself, it's just a quick story about some random dude who half of the people reading the backstory knows nothing about. The rest is pretty much irrelevant.

I am just really confused about what to expect from this organization/clan and it just seems really rushed and unthought through to me.

Someone's gotta say it. =)

I beg not to be sarcastic. Kinda pisses me off. "Someone's gotta say it. =)"
Thank you however for the constructive criticism. I will work through the points, updating the post for things to make a little more sense. The aim is for it to be a Mafia, rather than a family. The business is a side thing, but easier for me to have everything in one place therefore it being apart of the post.
The backstory was rushed yes, as it was the last thing I did. Didn't even think anyone read the backstory anymore tbh

EDIT:
Backstory was updated to make more sense, explaining as to why we are called what we are and hopefully giving a clearer insight as to who we are and why we are here.