07-11-2018, 12:29 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:07 AM by Fearless Community.
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I am a little confused as to what you are aiming to achieve and what your intentions are with this organization/clan. You've publicised a roster that somewhat screams Mafia, you claim that you're a family, what's the family name? Redemption Family? Not only that but your ranks stretch from your classic Mafia ranks and then suddenly turns military and then takes a leap into corporate America. So which is it? Mafia, PMC or a company? (I understand that you are running a business alongside)
Your backstory is incomplete and doesn't really explain anything about the organization/clan itself, it's just a quick story about some random dude who half of the people reading the backstory knows nothing about. The rest is pretty much irrelevant.
I am just really confused about what to expect from this organization/clan and it just seems really rushed and unthought through to me.
Someone's gotta say it. =)
Your backstory is incomplete and doesn't really explain anything about the organization/clan itself, it's just a quick story about some random dude who half of the people reading the backstory knows nothing about. The rest is pretty much irrelevant.
I am just really confused about what to expect from this organization/clan and it just seems really rushed and unthought through to me.
Someone's gotta say it. =)