Animation in gmod i made
#1
You can check it out if you want to, tell me what you think about it:
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#2
Nice!
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#3
Nice!

Some tips for your next video.

1) Keep the camera moving. A shot with some "slight" movement feels way more "alive" than a completely steady shot.
2) Play with the zoom.
3) Add some close-ups. Like, when the combine stood still and killed the machine-gunner, you could've added a close up of the barrel firing. Basically, any "cheesy" shot will make your video look better. Footsteps etc.
4) The cut between the combine firing and the other guy getting killed felt "weird". Next time play around with the "timing" between each shots and "feel" the right one.

Anyway, good one! I love seeing people trying for things and eventually they get better.

p.s.: I'm a "filmmaker" my self. Wink
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My next animation:
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