03-19-2014, 10:18 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:03 AM by Fearless Community.
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A few tips,
But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
- Stop exaggerating the use of "?".
- Try to make it happen a bit faster, people tend to stop watching after a while.
- Play around with the fonts. Try have some background to the text, white on black (without any other shapes than the font) tends to be very boring.
- Fix some grammar fails (I'm not perfect myself, but yeah lol).
- Have some moving pictures.
- Try to make the theme of the video style more representative of Fearless. As of now it is rather dramatic, which I personally don't see how Fearless is. Use a lighter theme, so to say...
But I like the idea, keep up with the editing!
Kind Regards,
Floodify
Floodify