Music I made on pc. Give fair opinion plz
#1
Made some mucic on my pc. and people tell me that it's actually good. but I want more proove. I want to be surtain.

What do you think of it?

Lead the March


End of the March

Coljow (random XD)
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#2
It sounds like you know how to work with whatever software you're using. Now you just need to come up with a catchy beat, and maybe some vocals?
It's a good start.
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#3
Some actually really good ideas in there, just needs a bit of tidying up. there is a lack beats in there so ether find some loops (loads free online) or try making your own. work on your production and keep at it, you have a good ear for leads Smile
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#4
#NewLoadingSong
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#5
meh...
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#6
Very nicely done, liked the piano one the most.
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#7
Sounds like a song that would be played in an adventure game in the 90's.
user title was put to "one of the elders" by default, and holy shit does that sound extreme
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#8
(09-14-2013, 06:42 AM)kakcraft Wrote: Sounds like a song that would be played in an adventure game in the 90's.

The new Pokémon theme song XD
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#9
This is definitely garageband..
Sounds like the song i made when i went to the Apple Store

It is nice tho
#10
(09-17-2013, 04:45 AM)Nevinator Wrote: This is definitely garageband..
(09-11-2013, 02:20 PM)Hostage Wrote: Made some mucic on my pc.

Anyway, critique time:
Needs more cowbell.

No, seriously now:
"Lead the March": Incredibly repetitive and boring. Not much else to say, really.

"End of the March": The piano part was nicely done, and the drums were pretty catchy; but after a while it just feels like the same few ideas repeating themselves over and over. Also, it could've done with some more backing melodies - some parts felt very hollow, if you catch my drift.

"Coljow": This one is probably my favourite out of the three, mainly because it's the least repetitive. It sounds quite abstract, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, although, like with the second track, some parts felt a bit hollow. Oh, and I see you just copied the drum track from "End of the March" into this one. Cheatin' ain't gon get you nowhere, y'know.
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