My First Typography

My First Typography

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12-18-2011, 10:37 AM (This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:01 AM by Fearless Community. Edit Reason: Checked Encoding )

It's good, but really boring. All the text really does is appear and disappear, with the occasional blur. You should include some more effects (but don't go overboard) and some colours, and maybe a few more images, too.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IUPu_ipbVB0[/youtube]

I also saw a repeated misuse of the word "of", which really annoyed me.

Otherwise it's quite good.

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My First Typography - by Jamie - 12-17-2011, 10:33 PM

RE: My First Typography - by 7rozen_7ear_ - 12-17-2011, 10:47 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Jamie - 12-17-2011, 10:53 PM

RE: My First Typography - by 7rozen_7ear_ - 12-17-2011, 11:00 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Jamie - 12-17-2011, 11:15 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Fleet Admiral Zapington - 12-17-2011, 11:30 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Ms. Mudpie - 12-18-2011, 10:37 AM

RE: My First Typography - by Jamie - 12-18-2011, 03:18 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Ms. Mudpie - 12-18-2011, 04:09 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Jamie - 12-18-2011, 05:19 PM

RE: My First Typography - by SilentGamer - 12-18-2011, 05:28 PM

RE: My First Typography - by Jamie - 12-18-2011, 05:49 PM

RE: My First Typography - by The_Alpha_Dog - 12-19-2011, 10:35 AM

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