10-12-2011, 12:17 AM
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(10-11-2011, 03:29 PM)The Enemy Snipaah Wrote: Hey, I liked it , but I think you 'overdid' it too much, could be better if you kept it nice and quiet. Maybe smoothen up the ending, and yes I can read, I see it's your first. But anyway, you have potential, do you have more?
I have my version of Still alive on that profile