06-27-2014, 06:34 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:03 AM by Fearless Community.
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Looks pretty badass, but there's a few grammar errors I should point out. 1. A "woman" named... not A women named. And one other, you put "hearth attack" instead of "heart attack." Just wanted to tell you so it looks a little more professional. The clan looks really good though.

![[Image: XiLkxQo.jpg]](https://i.imgur.com/XiLkxQo.jpg)