Kumonryu Law Offices

[DoomDude1]

While admirable, points 4,5 and 6 are not in-character in any way.

If I reword it to how Toxic worded it will it be alright?

The issue is in the fact that the thread is posted under "Roleplay". Offering services such as 5 and 6 (arguably 4 as well, but that can be adjusted accordingly) reaches clearly outside of the world of "in-character".


Now, what you could do, is remove the points of 5 and 6 (while heavily rewriting point 4) and placing a link to a separate "Off topic" thread, the link itself being in a spoiler.