Just something I wrote
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(02-24-2014, 05:00 PM)Midget Wrote: I like it, besides, I feel like I can relate to it in a way. You should try to do more of these if you can!

Thanks man!
I have written some more, just not on a PC Wink

Edit: I found one languishing on my phone
Tbh I don't like it as much, but I'll let you guys be the judge


Spoiler :
Take a walk

Family's pounding my head... Just wanna go bed.

Revise!
That triggers something, but it's unfamiliar

You wanna escape, throw out all the hate, you can't

Suddenly you break.

Take a walk
Take a walk
I say to myself over and over
I feel my eyes grow heavy, myself falling.

I run for my keys, fall onto my knees, I'm at the door, out the door. I feel the hate no more.

The cold air licks at my face... Like a pup with the best happiness I can grace.

10 minutes later I'm back, then I feel the whip crack

REVISE REVISE
it's screaming now
45 day then you'll be made to pay

Here's some science

Here's some maths

I can't revise I cry, it's all Greek! I feel so very very weak.

So I just keep shouting in my mind like clockwork beginning to grind

Take. A. Walk.


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Messages In This Thread
Just something I wrote - by Barkles - 02-21-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: Just something I wrote - by Tandy - 02-22-2014, 09:22 PM
RE: Just something I wrote - by Barkles - 02-22-2014, 10:19 PM
RE: Just something I wrote - by Haarek - 02-24-2014, 05:00 PM
RE: Just something I wrote - by Barkles - 02-24-2014, 10:52 PM

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