[Unofficial] Infamous Mafia
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(02-08-2014, 06:58 AM)Jarz Wrote: Much friendly criticism for you.

I don't want to look at " [Unofficial] [Recruiting] " whenever the latest post is on this thread. Try removing the Recruiting bracket?

More colors, sizes, pictures, backstory, etc.. It will make the thread more appealing getting you more members.

The ranks are not fitting to the mafia. The mafia would not have their Don named the CEO, their Consigliere a Commander, or Soldato's as Field Agents. More ranks are also welcome to make the clan unique.

Try adding a
Code:
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to make the application much easier to copy and paste.
Good luck!
Thank you, Jarz. I appreciate your constructional criticism and I will take your advice. I am new to making clans, so I wasn't completely sure what to when making this whole post. Thank you again, for that advice and I will update this post shortly so its more close to what you said.
Regards,

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[Unofficial] Infamous Mafia - by bismo - 02-08-2014, 03:17 AM
RE: [Unofficial] [Recruiting] Infamous Mafia - by bismo - 02-08-2014, 04:47 PM
RE: [Unofficial] Infamous Mafia - by Floodify - 05-14-2014, 12:49 PM
RE: [Unofficial] Infamous Mafia - by bismo - 05-14-2014, 08:57 PM
RE: [Unofficial] Infamous Mafia - by Floodify - 05-14-2014, 08:58 PM

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