02-21-2014, 10:36 PM (This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:03 AM by Fearless Community.
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Hi guys,
I wrote what could be called poetry but tbh I just wanted to express what I'm feeling
Spoiler :
Teenage pressure
I sit and I stare at the wall that is bare, ain't no sense in me to bear.
I wonder where I'm going to be, now I'm nearly 16, and what I don't get there
Would I die? Maybe would I battle through, in a constant gray must? Probably.
They say life is why you make of it, so what have I made if mine? A gamer with long hair, and not a care..
Doesn't help with life, but what can an addict do
When I game I have no pain, I have that rush.
Then the pain, with no refrain, hits me as it must.
Exams
Exams
More and more they pile, I cry for help, I push it away when I get it.
I wasn't always like this, I just started enjoying life is all.
But now all I can do is stare at this blank wall.
Judge it, Idm.
I just thought I'd share it as some guys ik like it
Edit: ik it looks like the standard OTT dramatic teen, but that isn't the angle I was going for.
02-24-2014, 10:52 PM (This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:03 AM by Fearless Community.
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(02-24-2014, 05:00 PM)Midget Wrote: I like it, besides, I feel like I can relate to it in a way. You should try to do more of these if you can!
Thanks man!
I have written some more, just not on a PC
Edit: I found one languishing on my phone
Tbh I don't like it as much, but I'll let you guys be the judge
Spoiler :
Take a walk
Family's pounding my head... Just wanna go bed.
Revise!
That triggers something, but it's unfamiliar
You wanna escape, throw out all the hate, you can't
Suddenly you break.
Take a walk
Take a walk
I say to myself over and over
I feel my eyes grow heavy, myself falling.
I run for my keys, fall onto my knees, I'm at the door, out the door. I feel the hate no more.
The cold air licks at my face... Like a pup with the best happiness I can grace.
10 minutes later I'm back, then I feel the whip crack
REVISE REVISE
it's screaming now
45 day then you'll be made to pay
Here's some science
Here's some maths
I can't revise I cry, it's all Greek! I feel so very very weak.
So I just keep shouting in my mind like clockwork beginning to grind