[SYNDICATE] Containment RP [OLD] [CHECK NEW V2 POST]

[ltblackcoat]

It went Flipping well, Details soon.

[mintblackbeard]

Was great. Sad I had to leave after being murdered by staff after going insane. The images of my guy did kinda make me feel a bit weird . Brr.

[DVN]

Shame I couldn't make it, sounds great. Well done everyone.

[Mike]

You would have loved it Cal!

V2 coming soon guys.

[Kahjo]

You would have loved it Cal!

V2 coming soon guys.

I wish I was there . Sounds Great!

[ltblackcoat]

Very fun! Great RP! Even when I was accidentally stepped on. *cough* Blackout *cough*

In my deference I was pushed, But I never the less apologies, this will be noted in future and avoided.

[ltblackcoat]

I would Like to in my part thank the medical team and infected volunteers, While I was busy In my areas what I can say is that the hospital and Lab/head office where both a nice build and well played, I thank you inputs.

I can only argue some new build points and possible more props in the "yard".

[Rylund]

Really really really unorganized RP....

I attended to this RP, it seemed like a nice and wellthought RP you peeps was setting up. You proved me wrong.. 
I joined the RP right after you guys adverted the city was infected by some kind of virus, we came to a line at the tunnel where a note said something along the lines of "Pass this line and you will be shot". (Pretty sure this is not allowed)
We were around 20 people that were in the RP as citizens and had to go throug the first step of testing if we, the citizens was infected.. Some of us had to wait 1½ hours for that including myself(PLEASE GET MORE THAN ONE DOCTOR). When the first stage was done I got a message that I had to go to the safe zone as fast as possible because a helicopter was waiting to escort everyone out - now comes the extremely bad part of the roleplay. 

I came up to the safe zone and was "welcomed" by a bunch of people with weapons, the first thing I saw was dead bodies everywhere.. Why? Because the safe zone was apparantly infected which made the "staff" of the RP kill everyone involved in it. I do not see how that could even be considered an ending - killing everyone participating in the RP and calling it quits, in my opinion that just seemed like you got bored of the RP and wanted it to end as fast as possible. 
I was so lucky to not be killed by this killing spree, instead I became a test subject for the crazy doctor - the second RP I even saw here...

Here's some pros and cons from my point of view.
Pros:

• A few good roleplays happened - The start area where lt. blackcoat tested people for type X virus. 
  Blackcout was the only doctor the first 1 hour of the roleplay if I recall correctly, but he did an exceptional job inside the shack. If I were you I'd definitely keep onto this guy as he was simply amazing!
  
• Was fun the first 5 minutes where actual roleplay happened for everyone.
  The first 5 minutes of the roleplay everyone was welcomed outside of the gate by Skummet, he checked everyones ID card before carrying on. This included everyone in the roleplay and gave a good first impression.
  

Cons: 

• Unorganized
  This roleplay was simply unorganized. This seemed like a one day idea to reality roleplay, this meaning that you probably got the idea the same day as carrying it onto the v2d server. It seemed like no-one had thought the roleplay throug before actually doing the roleplay on the servers. Next time you do this roleplay you should probably plan it all the way throug from beginning to end so it doesn't have the same shitty ending as last time (Read underneath).
  
• Killing spree which didn't really make sense to me.
  The roleplay ended in one massive killing spree in my eyes, fair enough some of you might be aggressive roleplayers but ending a roleplay with killing everyone participating in your roleplay? Not cool. I'd have loved to see the roleplay carried out to a good and more realistic ending than the one we saw in this roleplay. The ending was like watching some action movie in the middle of a shootout, I honestly would never want to attend to a roleplay if I knew it was just going to end in one massive killingspree.
  
• Waiting time (Seriously get more doctors at the start of the RP)
  lt.blackcoat was the only doctor in the shack later joined by Skummet, two doctors for carrying out a 5-10min roleplay with 20 individuals.. That is simply not fun for the people that have to wait in the line. Honestly you should get more doctors so this part of the roleplay would take 10 MAX 20 minutes. Waiting in the line for 1½ hours is just hideous and boring.
  
• KoS in the tunnel to UM.
  Having KoS in the tunnels against everyone passing the line? I thought this was deemed a rulebreakage a long time ago. - the KoS line might have been removed later on as I didn't go outside before the roleplay ended.
  

Overall this roleplay was just a waste of time and had more cons than pros. I personally don't want to attend to this roleplay once again unless all the stuff I listed above would be fixed. 

Please do not start a war from this, I simply come with some constructive criticism.

[ltblackcoat]

Really really really unorganized RP....

I attended to this RP, it seemed like a nice and wellthought RP you peeps was setting up. You proved me wrong.. 
I joined the RP right after you guys adverted the city was infected by some kind of virus, we came to a line at the tunnel where a note said something along the lines of "Pass this line and you will be shot". (Pretty sure this is not allowed)
We were around 20 people that were in the RP as citizens and had to go throug the first step of testing if we, the citizens was infected.. Some of us had to wait 1½ hours for that including myself(PLEASE GET MORE THAN ONE DOCTOR). When the first stage was done I got a message that I had to go to the safe zone as fast as possible because a helicopter was waiting to escort everyone out - now comes the extremely bad part of the roleplay. 

I came up to the safe zone and was "welcomed" by a bunch of people with weapons, the first thing I saw was dead bodies everywhere.. Why? Because the safe zone was apparantly infected which made the "staff" of the RP kill everyone involved in it. I do not see how that could even be considered an ending - killing everyone participating in the RP and calling it quits, in my opinion that just seemed like you got bored of the RP and wanted it to end as fast as possible. 
I was so lucky to not be killed by this killing spree, instead I became a test subject for the crazy doctor - the second RP I even saw here...

Here's some pros and cons from my point of view.
Pros:

• A few good roleplays happened - The start area where lt. blackcoat tested people for type X virus. 
  Blackcout was the only doctor the first 1 hour of the roleplay if I recall correctly, but he did an exceptional job inside the shack. If I were you I'd definitely keep onto this guy as he was simply amazing!
  
• Was fun the first 5 minutes where actual roleplay happened for everyone.
  The first 5 minutes of the roleplay everyone was welcomed outside of the gate by Skummet, he checked everyones ID card before carrying on. This included everyone in the roleplay and gave a good first impression.
  

Cons: 

• Unorganized
  This roleplay was simply unorganized. This seemed like a one day idea to reality roleplay, this meaning that you probably got the idea the same day as carrying it onto the v2d server. It seemed like no-one had thought the roleplay throug before actually doing the roleplay on the servers. Next time you do this roleplay you should probably plan it all the way throug from beginning to end so it doesn't have the same shitty ending as last time (Read underneath).
  
• Killing spree which didn't really make sense to me.
  The roleplay ended in one massive killing spree in my eyes, fair enough some of you might be aggressive roleplayers but ending a roleplay with killing everyone participating in your roleplay? Not cool. I'd have loved to see the roleplay carried out to a good and more realistic ending than the one we saw in this roleplay. The ending was like watching some action movie in the middle of a shootout, I honestly would never want to attend to a roleplay if I knew it was just going to end in one massive killingspree.
  
• Waiting time (Seriously get more doctors at the start of the RP)
  lt.blackcoat was the only doctor in the shack later joined by Skummet, two doctors for carrying out a 5-10min roleplay with 20 individuals.. That is simply not fun for the people that have to wait in the line. Honestly you should get more doctors so this part of the roleplay would take 10 MAX 20 minutes. Waiting in the line for 1½ hours is just hideous and boring.
  
• KoS in the tunnel to UM.
  Having KoS in the tunnels against everyone passing the line? I thought this was deemed a rulebreakage a long time ago. - the KoS line might have been removed later on as I didn't go outside before the roleplay ended.
  

Overall this roleplay was just a waste of time and had more cons than pros. I personally don't want to attend to this roleplay once again unless all the stuff I listed above would be fixed. 

Please do not start a war from this, I simply come with some constructive criticism.

Immediately I see I am reading a commentary on the FIRST run through we did, not the second (Far superior) one. We all would agree that improvements would be implemented (notably a less genocidal ending, and a larger medical area (that shack was too small) among others) and they where.

However I am as of now (officially) A low ranking member and feel I can not comment too much on that incident.

I also appreciate you liked my role even in our First attempt.

[Kahjo]

Yeah, On the first RP Like this I was waiting about 1.5h For the first checkpoint and ended up last in the line. When I got to the final (um base) The RP ended with me just coming from
the helicopter there, Then RPP Were handed out and RP stopped without any actual "Ending". As Snowred said, More Doctors and less waiting time and an ending. But the Idea is good.

This is just my opinion about this. This is just to make sure you can organize this better next time.