FUMUKU International

[Dick]

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Why are you applying? I am applying to FUMUKU Security Division as I've seen them on the street where I live, I have seen them rehabilitate offenders to avid fishers in EvoCity. I enjoy watching the work they do and would enjoy more being a part of it. I enjoy working in the security industry and would enjoy even more to do it as part of an already well established team.
What is your background in the field you are applying for? My background is rather substantial. I have dabbled as a Local LEO progressing very quickly to sergeant. I left the force to do private security, I ran my own firm which was involved in garbage disposal, private security, and parcel delivery. I left that company to work as a PMC and had successful operations in EvoCity and further afield. Of which can't be disclosed due to non disclosure agreement with the clients.
Why should we pick you for FUMUKU? I can bring to FUMUKU a particular set of skills that are hard to come by. I am very vigilant through my previous experience as well as martial arts training. I would be able to bring fresh skills and ideas to an already established well successful team.
What will you offer FUMUKU? I will offer whatever is required. My time, my resources, my array of skills, my weapons, my transport and anything else that is required of me.

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Hello,

I've been reading your application. I think it's really good!

However,

I think it can be better.

A lot of people fail our test because they don't write enough. or they don't really give a good reason to why they should be picked rather than lets say someone else. This is from my point of view obviously as the others might think else but I've noticed that the people who regularly get picked tend to be the ones with an amazing application. The ones that have Line upon line on how they could improve it. When I joined it wrote a bit but obviously it's different every thing. Anyways, below i'm going to quote some things that you could improve on when looking at the question as there is so many ways you can alter a question to make it interesting.

1. Why should we pick you for FUMUKU?

•    We used the word WHY to attempt to get people to write more than a line.
  
•    Expand on WHY we should pick you.
  
•    Allow me to place it like this. Why should we pick you over someone else?
  

That is actually basically me on my part. I believe you should be collected in on added this detail into it. Thank you for changing it if you do as I think you'll be pretty cool guy if you do. 

Kind Regards

Dr. William "Sour" Castagnier
[b]FUMUKU International
Security Clearance: B
F.I.D - S.D 7492