FUMUKU International

[Eisenhorn]

Mr Gccc application review.

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Applicant Name: [FL:RP] Mr Gccc

Events and situations you have seen/been with the applicant in: None.

List any and all rule infractions you have personaly seen the applicant commit, this can include previous Ban Requests you were involved in and infractions that were never reported: None.

List any and all positive attributes you can and list examples:
Good amount of in-game hours.
Good amount of effort in his application.

List any and all negative attributes you can and list examples:
4 bans.

Overall evaluation: Nice amount of hours, decent application, good effort

Recomendations: Trial Approval.

Cat application

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Applicant Name: [FL:RP] Cat

Events and situations you have seen/been with the applicant in: None.

List any and all rule infractions you have personaly seen the applicant commit, this can include previous Ban Requests you were involved in and infractions that were never reported: None.

List any and all positive attributes you can and list examples:
Good reports from FUMUKU Management who've been on the server with him.
Good amount of hours, and an rp point indicate he can rp.
Cute avatar.

List any and all negative attributes you can and list examples:
Age is a concern, (sorry dude) may not be able to take FUMUKU Int, seriously.
This may sound harsh but it's only constructive criticism.
Characters rp bio is abit implausible, and it's badly written, i'm willing to overlook this due to writers age. Spec ops soldiers tend to make bad security guards, and you dont just join the special forces straight from the police. I know it's a highly attractive role to people, but it's very common in applications, and does not make yours stand out. There are hundreds of different jobs you can include.


Overall evaluation: Young, has worked well with members before, can be guided to be an even better role player and writer.

Recomendations: Trial Approval.

Yours faithfully Director of FUMUKU Legal services, Z.Massani I.D 3514.

p.s Cat, don't take the criticism too harshly, i'm just trying to point out how you can improve your application, with most applicants theres a good chance the only impression I get of them is from their application, but you're young and at least you understand punctuation. From what i've heard you're a good player and would be a benefit to FUMUKU and I hope my criticism helps you to improve your character bio.