03-20-2015, 12:45 AM
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(03-19-2015, 10:41 PM)Rain Wrote: I like it apart from the white text as it looks a bit out of place for me. It could be the positioning as in too close to other parts of the design/image. Or that theres just a bit too much text but everything else is nice. I personally would use bullet points as they make paragraphs of text look less blocky, thats up to you though.
It's supposed to be informative as well as look like a technical sort of 'HUD' type design. Bullet points wouldn't really be great for an advertisement in my opinion. Thanks for the feedback!