Evocity promotion! Youtube video!
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Right here are some tips.

Your Camera movement is to jittery, You can't just stop and go + the fact you moving your camera to quick.

I couldn't really tell if this was a Trailer for the Server or just the map.

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When you said "Roleplay all you want here" No one was around, and the only cars you showed was the lambogini, so people are going to get the wrong impression
And think that we only one or two types of cars.

and try not to put to much effect on the text, not many people care about it being all "cool" looking, Just nice and simple, people care about the footage.

But its good for a first attempt.
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Evocity promotion! Youtube video! - by doomeddec - 07-26-2011, 06:36 PM
RE: Evocity promotion! Youtube video! - by Jamie - 07-27-2011, 11:32 AM
RE: Evocity promotion! Youtube video! - by Strom - 07-27-2011, 07:44 PM

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