[Unofficial] Retrovston Security Firm(R.S.F)
#1
Introduction:

Retrovston Security Firm or The R.S.F are a group of security experts which aim to protect any of your valuable assets. We also often provide our services to the government. We are often thought of as somewhat of a PMC(Private Militant Company)



Products:
Kidnapping
Extraction
Protection
Storage
Information Safekeeping
Presidential Removal
Enforcement
Law Enforcement
Presidential Protection
Undercover Activity



Qualifications:

All RSF members are suited and armed combat veterans without extreme understanding of both Security and destructuralization.




Ranks:

All RSF members are issued an ID Card apon joining that looks like this:
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It is encouraged to have it as either your spray or FL signature.
Ranks are as follows:
Owner
Co-Management
Special Team Leader
Special Agent Tier 2
Special Agent Tier 1
Team Leader
Agent Tier 2
Agent Tier 1
Recruit Tier 3
Recruit Tier 2
Recruit Tier 1



Members:






Application Form:
Code:
Hours:
Reason:
List your arms in detail as well as your skill with them:
Have a suit?:y/n
What car(s) do you drive?:
Amount of bans:
Are you up for passive and aggressive rp?:y/n
#2
Looks Good, I wish you luck. maybe add a back-story?
#3
I would suggest adding a back-story to give it a more professional look.

Also, change the font of the text and use other colours and fonts on the images, they are extremely hard to read.


Other than that, good luck!
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  • Alphaey
#4
Hours:Signitaure says it.
Reason: After a hard desicion, I decided to close down tech build. So now, I want to join this very interesting clan
List your arms in detail as well as your skill with them:Ak-47, Mainly. I have an accruate shot.
Have a suit?:Yes
What car(s) do you drive?: Mainly lokus
Amount of bans:1
Are you up for passive and aggressive rp?:Yes
Your Fellow FL member
Nook
Donator
#5
(02-04-2013, 08:07 PM)Doomdude1 Wrote: I would suggest adding a back-story to give it a more professional look.

Also, change the font of the text and use other colours and fonts on the images, they are extremely hard to read.


Other than that, good luck!

Your brightness is low then, gonna change the text for thread though.
#6
That font. You should get a different font, as the current one is quite hard to read. As mentioned by Doom, you need to add some background and such. Just add more text basicly, and try to convince people to why they should join YOUR clan, and not someone elses.

Your signature is very dark by the way Smile
Sincerely, Enzyme
Ex-Supervising Administrator
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  • Alphaey
#7
(02-19-2013, 08:25 AM)Doctor_Enzyme Wrote: That font. You should get a different font, as the current one is quite hard to read. As mentioned by Doom, you need to add some background and such. Just add more text basicly, and try to convince people to why they should join YOUR clan, and not someone elses.

Your signature is very dark by the way Smile

I might join this, to kidnap you, and ousmn.
#8
Clan declared closed as owner is permanently suspended.


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