Story Collab!
#1
You're walking in Evo City with a slight spring in your step. Today is a good day for you as you have just recieved a raise from your boss at the EvoCity Office & Home Supply store, when you pass a homeless man by the BP garage. He is missing an arm and is dressed in mere rags, dirty and stained with what looks like blood. He has numerous scars on his dirt encrusted face, which is covered in wrinkles. He looks about 50-60 and is sitting by the side of the road, with a battered sign which reads: "Ned muny for an arm tramnsplant, plees help". As you pass him, he looks at you with pleading blue eyes and you stop. What do you do?

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#2
As you try to walk on the old man jumps up and grabs your new jacket smearing it with dirt, he begs and begs and begs. You begin to dial the police, however he smacks the phone out your hand.
#3
(02-09-2013, 05:57 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote: As you try to walk on the old man jumps up and grabs your new jacket smearing it with dirt, he begs and begs and begs. You begin to dial the police, however he smacks the phone out your hand.

Upon confirming that this man has less honour than you interpreted, you begin to back away, sensing trouble. As you back away, you slip and fall, the man, edging closer with a plea in his eyes picks up a rock and stares longingly at your nice suit...
#4
(02-09-2013, 06:00 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 05:57 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote: As you try to walk on the old man jumps up and grabs your new jacket smearing it with dirt, he begs and begs and begs. You begin to dial the police, however he smacks the phone out your hand.

Upon confirming that this man has less honour than you interpreted, you begin to back away, sensing trouble. As you back away, you slip and fall, the man, edging closer with a plea in his eyes picks up a rock and stares longingly at your nice suit...

He suddenly pulls out a butterfly knife out of his jacket and menacingly stares at your chest cavity. You begin to crawl back as he gets closer and closer at increased speed until finally an interested passer by gets out of his car.
#5
(02-09-2013, 06:23 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:00 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 05:57 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote: As you try to walk on the old man jumps up and grabs your new jacket smearing it with dirt, he begs and begs and begs. You begin to dial the police, however he smacks the phone out your hand.

Upon confirming that this man has less honour than you interpreted, you begin to back away, sensing trouble. As you back away, you slip and fall, the man, edging closer with a plea in his eyes picks up a rock and stares longingly at your nice suit...

He suddenly pulls out a butterfly knife out of his jacket and menacingly stares at your chest cavity. You begin to crawl back as he gets closer and closer at increased speed until finally an interested passer by gets out of his car.

You realise the mounting danger of this homeless man as he approaches the man with the car and begins to sneak up on the poor man. Remembering the rock the homeless man dropped in order to pick up the knife, you run up to the homeless man and slam the rock down on his head. Hard. A passing officer sees this and you sense even more trouble...
#6
(02-09-2013, 06:25 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:23 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:00 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 05:57 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote: As you try to walk on the old man jumps up and grabs your new jacket smearing it with dirt, he begs and begs and begs. You begin to dial the police, however he smacks the phone out your hand.

Upon confirming that this man has less honour than you interpreted, you begin to back away, sensing trouble. As you back away, you slip and fall, the man, edging closer with a plea in his eyes picks up a rock and stares longingly at your nice suit...

He suddenly pulls out a butterfly knife out of his jacket and menacingly stares at your chest cavity. You begin to crawl back as he gets closer and closer at increased speed until finally an interested passer by gets out of his car.

You realise the mounting danger of this homeless man as he approaches the man with the car and begins to sneak up on the poor man. Remembering the rock the homeless man dropped in order to pick up the knife, you run up to the homeless man and slam the rock down on his head. Hard. A passing officer sees this and you sense even more trouble...

You see the homeless man's blood pooling on the hard concrete floor, the officer approaches with his weapon drawn screaming
"Police, put your hands behind your head and get on your fucking knees!".
You immediately comply and wait until he cuffs you, once cuffed you try to tell him what happened. All he states is ''That was my brother, I came to take him home and give him his medication''.
#7
(02-09-2013, 06:52 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:25 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:23 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:00 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 05:57 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote: As you try to walk on the old man jumps up and grabs your new jacket smearing it with dirt, he begs and begs and begs. You begin to dial the police, however he smacks the phone out your hand.

Upon confirming that this man has less honour than you interpreted, you begin to back away, sensing trouble. As you back away, you slip and fall, the man, edging closer with a plea in his eyes picks up a rock and stares longingly at your nice suit...

He suddenly pulls out a butterfly knife out of his jacket and menacingly stares at your chest cavity. You begin to crawl back as he gets closer and closer at increased speed until finally an interested passer by gets out of his car.

You realise the mounting danger of this homeless man as he approaches the man with the car and begins to sneak up on the poor man. Remembering the rock the homeless man dropped in order to pick up the knife, you run up to the homeless man and slam the rock down on his head. Hard. A passing officer sees this and you sense even more trouble...

You see the homeless man's blood pooling on the hard concrete floor, the officer approaches with his weapon drawn screaming
"Police, put your hands behind your head and get on your freaking knees!".
You immediately comply and wait until he cuffs you, once cuffed you try to tell him what happened. All he states is ''That was my brother, I came to take him home and give him his medication''.

You realise now what you have done and fall to the floor with guilt. You feel sick, your vision is blurry and you pass out. You wake up in hospital with 2 police officers guarding you. You are in the private nexus hospital. They begin to drag you up and chuck you a suit. They inform you that they will escort you to the court in 10 minutes...
#8
(02-09-2013, 06:58 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:52 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:25 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:23 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:00 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote: Upon confirming that this man has less honour than you interpreted, you begin to back away, sensing trouble. As you back away, you slip and fall, the man, edging closer with a plea in his eyes picks up a rock and stares longingly at your nice suit...

He suddenly pulls out a butterfly knife out of his jacket and menacingly stares at your chest cavity. You begin to crawl back as he gets closer and closer at increased speed until finally an interested passer by gets out of his car.

You realise the mounting danger of this homeless man as he approaches the man with the car and begins to sneak up on the poor man. Remembering the rock the homeless man dropped in order to pick up the knife, you run up to the homeless man and slam the rock down on his head. Hard. A passing officer sees this and you sense even more trouble...

You see the homeless man's blood pooling on the hard concrete floor, the officer approaches with his weapon drawn screaming
"Police, put your hands behind your head and get on your freaking knees!".
You immediately comply and wait until he cuffs you, once cuffed you try to tell him what happened. All he states is ''That was my brother, I came to take him home and give him his medication''.

You realise now what you have done and fall to the floor with guilt. You feel sick, your vision is blurry and you pass out. You wake up in hospital with 2 police officers guarding you. You are in the private nexus hospital. They begin to drag you up and chuck you a suit. They inform you that they will escort you to the court in 10 minutes...

They get you up on your feet, you can barely stand. They walk you through the court doors to be faced by a sea of disgusted faces, they shout, they boo, they hiss. You stand trial for a good few hours until finally the man you saved is brought up.
#9
(02-09-2013, 08:09 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:58 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:52 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:25 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:23 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote: He suddenly pulls out a butterfly knife out of his jacket and menacingly stares at your chest cavity. You begin to crawl back as he gets closer and closer at increased speed until finally an interested passer by gets out of his car.

You realise the mounting danger of this homeless man as he approaches the man with the car and begins to sneak up on the poor man. Remembering the rock the homeless man dropped in order to pick up the knife, you run up to the homeless man and slam the rock down on his head. Hard. A passing officer sees this and you sense even more trouble...

You see the homeless man's blood pooling on the hard concrete floor, the officer approaches with his weapon drawn screaming
"Police, put your hands behind your head and get on your freaking knees!".
You immediately comply and wait until he cuffs you, once cuffed you try to tell him what happened. All he states is ''That was my brother, I came to take him home and give him his medication''.

You realise now what you have done and fall to the floor with guilt. You feel sick, your vision is blurry and you pass out. You wake up in hospital with 2 police officers guarding you. You are in the private nexus hospital. They begin to drag you up and chuck you a suit. They inform you that they will escort you to the court in 10 minutes...

They get you up on your feet, you can barely stand. They walk you through the court doors to be faced by a sea of disgusted faces, they shout, they boo, they hiss. You stand trial for a good few hours until finally the man you saved is brought up.

The rest of the court is a breeze, until you hear the final verdict of "not guilty". You sigh with relief, as the homeless mans brother looks at you with burning hatred in you eyes. As you pass him to exit the court, he whispers to you, swearing an oath to have his revenge...
#10
(02-09-2013, 08:48 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 08:09 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:58 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:52 PM)Disabled Angel Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 06:25 PM)Burrito Warrior Wrote: You realise the mounting danger of this homeless man as he approaches the man with the car and begins to sneak up on the poor man. Remembering the rock the homeless man dropped in order to pick up the knife, you run up to the homeless man and slam the rock down on his head. Hard. A passing officer sees this and you sense even more trouble...

You see the homeless man's blood pooling on the hard concrete floor, the officer approaches with his weapon drawn screaming
"Police, put your hands behind your head and get on your freaking knees!".
You immediately comply and wait until he cuffs you, once cuffed you try to tell him what happened. All he states is ''That was my brother, I came to take him home and give him his medication''.

You realise now what you have done and fall to the floor with guilt. You feel sick, your vision is blurry and you pass out. You wake up in hospital with 2 police officers guarding you. You are in the private nexus hospital. They begin to drag you up and chuck you a suit. They inform you that they will escort you to the court in 10 minutes...

They get you up on your feet, you can barely stand. They walk you through the court doors to be faced by a sea of disgusted faces, they shout, they boo, they hiss. You stand trial for a good few hours until finally the man you saved is brought up.

The rest of the court is a breeze, until you hear the final verdict of "not guilty". You sigh with relief, as the homeless mans brother looks at you with burning hatred in you eyes. As you pass him to exit the court, he whispers to you, swearing an oath to have his revenge...

You take a cab to your home and go to bed but you cannot sleep for the dead man's face is stuck in your mind and his brother's promise of retribution haunts you, "what will he do?" "am I safe in my own home?" then you finally fall asleep but you do not dream. Then you are waken up by a loud smashing sound outside your home........


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