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10-17-2012, 05:30 PM
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It is a good first effort.
I like the story a lot, the only thing is perhaps the general flow and description. I feel it is a little basic and too disjointed. However, making it sound flowing is hard to do.
I can see you've put a lot of effort in and it has come out well.
I like the story a lot, the only thing is perhaps the general flow and description. I feel it is a little basic and too disjointed. However, making it sound flowing is hard to do.
I can see you've put a lot of effort in and it has come out well.