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[aagaard]

hey guys i got an idea for a movie to make on the server

its a shortfilm about a car theif and his way to prison here are the manuskrip (just an idea you can come whit your ideas and changes)

citizen: parks car and walks away (in front of the office)
theif: lockpicks it and drives away
theif: drives past policecar whit 2 cops in it (in front of the stores on mainstreet)
cop1/2: follows
cop3/4 joins in the chase (at rebel spawn)
theif: crash his car and grabs his gun (on the road in front of the hospital)
cop1/2/3/4: points guns at him (shotguns and pistols)
theif: drops gun turns around and walks slowly towards the cops(by comand from a cop
cop1: tells him his rights

the screen turns black whit the sound of hand cuffs

on the screen it says 2 days later

theif: walks into courtroom (the court on 3 floor in nexus)
cop2/3: follows behind
jugde: starts the case (something like the court now handel case 2947 the state vs (theif name)
the lawyers talk some lawyer stuff
jurry: all say guilty of the crime
judge: whit the power given to me by the president i hereby sentens you to (idk 5 years?) in a state penatentury
cop3/4 takes him away

the screen turns black whit the sound of a hammer hiting the jugde table thingy

in the last scene you see the theif standing in a cell and the door closing in front of him (the prison in nexus)


THE END


i need someone that knows how to make a movie (who will film too) 0/1
4 cops 0/4
1 theif 0/1
2 lawyers 0/2
1 judge 0/1
3 jurry(or more) 0/3
1 citizen 0/1

please coment if you wanna join and what charekter you wanna play

if you have ideas im open for that too

(sorry if my English arent perfect but im not english american austrailien (from a contry that speaks english))

times for the recording willl come when the rolls are taken and we find a person to record and edit

(were the car gets stolen) http://cloud-3.steampowered.com/ugc/8852...C092103FA/
(were the theif crash his car and surrender to the police) http://cloud-2.steampowered.com/ugc/8852...EDE20F72C/
(the courtroom) http://cloud-4.steampowered.com/ugc/8852...446D7618B/
(jail were the theif ends) http://cloud-4.steampowered.com/ugc/8852...3338834BC/

[Venom]

Has a good story line. But, I would recommend you add a little more pictures and detail and maybe a time that this could happen?

[aagaard]

good idea il change it a little

[Ludo]

Id be glad to be an actor for the short film if you are interested in using me

[CorieTheNub]

I wouldn't mind being the Judge?

[DjBricheta]

I would like to be one of the cops, if I may...